What is your opinion?
Nerds can fight
"Thanks for your book, I just wish she could have saved her family 😭"
Love it
"I love the way you make it so nice I loved it so much that I was going to get to yo "
The nerd(s) can fight back.
"I absolutely loved the story. It is interesting and has an awesome plot with lots of twists. Keep writing your amazing at it. Lots of love and luck. All of you haters back off."
Decent Story
"This story was not horrible at all. I would read it again but the punctuation and grammer kinda threw me off. The plot was good and I liked the way it ended but I wish it was longer. Nice job, author. "
Still reading...
"The story started off good but about 20 chapters in there's a lot of confusion. I'll read a little more and see if it gets better. I hope so because I liked the original idea."
Period…
"First, let me just say that I am enjoying the story and it all looks very interesting with a unique plot, but it is like one long sentence from beginning to end. I have been reading this story for a while now (I have not finished yet) and I don’t think I have seen one period. Secondly, I feel like you end a scene too soon. Like when he said “you messed with the wrong guy”. It was basically just left there even though it seems like an important part of the story. Now this could just be a technique to spike interest, but personally I feel that it happens too often. Almost as if we are just jumping from day to day without ever getting a real explanation of what is happening. Lastly, I know you have already completed this story so it doesn’t really help commenting on everything that bothers me, but who knows maybe this could help you with your second book. Not hate just constructive criticism. I think that if you shorten your sentences and describe the situation a bit better, then you would have an amazing story on your hands. "
