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Amy comes to Coalport

"I really like this story but the only issue I had with it was the constant " we love you Amy", 4 or 5 times tolerable but it seemed so repetitive. The teenagers were highly unusual in the story if kids were like that today it would be a better world. It was a good story didn't want to put it down you just don't hear kids speak the way they do in the story."

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