Romance with a goal

"I was delighted to read your story Stephcece. I love the perspective of the narrator, she gives me various perspectives/ideas of other characters of the story, which help me foresee possible future events as this story progresses. I am very excited to see what you come up with next, as just from my initial reading of your first 3 chapters, I am already hooked. Note: I wonder what will happen to the narrator's situation as this story develops (What is her aim? How will the boys/men that we are introduced to, influence the narrator's actions?)"