What is your opinion?
Loved the concept and flow of novel
"Please write more...and keep updating. "
A Royal Romance!
"It is a very interesting story, set in a Royal setting. I love how Jayden is so obedient and how after their teen years, they met again. The journey was satisfying. Though the chapters have various point if views, I would like to suggest the author to use two point of views at a time which would make things more clear and better. Overall, I loved this book too much! Beautiful! "
A lot of potential!
"As this review is written, only 7 chapters have been published. I like the plot and am intrigued by your world-building. I noticed.a few grammar mistakes (unless they were intentional) that slightly bothered me, for example in chapter 2 when introducing the best friends, you put their whole names inside brackets instead of naturally introducing it through a conversation later on. The biggest problem I had with your writing is easily fixed. It is the varying point of views within chapters. I personally prefer to have only one point of view in each chapter. Chapter 1 especially felt chaotic and was a bit hard to follow but that was also influenced by the amount of information being given all at once. Besides chapter 1, though, the writing was good and easy to follow, and you convey the feelings and inner battles of the characters superbly. Overall, it is a good story which I enjoyed, and I can't wait for the upcoming chapters!"
The Makings of a Great Romance
"This novel has the makings of a whirlwind romance and I can't wait to read more. Jayden and Rosaleigh are such wonderful characters, strong enough to job off the page. I'm not sure if some of the writing style was intentional... it coming across as old English in a modern world. I do believe a little bit of editing is needed. Keep up the great work!"
Great plot!!
"I love the setting of it! I don't know why, but I love anything to do with royalty and stuff (maybe because of my childhood infatuation with princessy stuff, haha) but I really enjoyed that aspect of the story, although it didn't go very deep into it. I would have liked that much more! Another thing I liked was the world building, the characters and their dynamics. Although the dialogues could be worked on, to make them more natural, and less messy. I also enjoyed the underlining mystery. You played that well. ^^ But the one thing I think can be improved massively is the overall feel of the 2D characters, their vibe, and their unnaturalness. The main couple don't have as much chemistry as I'd like them to have, their relationship just suddenly developed, and that's why I feel like that needs to happen more naturally and convincingly. The romance part of this has to be more natural. Dialogues doesn't always flow, the pace is a bit off, and that really is jarring for me. When I'm reading, it feels a bit strange, so I suggest you work on those criterias more! But other than that, no complains!! Beautiful story and the plot is well done on! I hope my criticism can help you improve, I hope you all the best, love! Much love, Coffee ^^"
