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Happily Married

"Before starting this, I was low-key scared the alternate ending meant Audrey was going to end up back with Calvin. I’m SO glad I was wrong. I loved this version too, and honestly, I’m very happy with where Audrey’s story ended up."

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i liked that she and joe had a happy ending. also it serves him right to live a regretful life

"i liked that Audrey and joe had a happy ending. also it serves him right to live a regretful life."

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Lovely ending

"I like this ending too. Love the details of the emotions. "

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Mrs

"Still would have wanted it to be Calvin with her"

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Alt happily Married

"Don’t trust him, never found anyone to put up with his crap. He deserves what Karma is serving "

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Loved it!

"Loved story. Happy gor Joe and Audrey and all the Darcy kids. Kinda sad for Calvin, but he's ripping what he planted. "

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Love it

"This was such a good ending for it and I love that he still cared for her afterwards but never took his feelings out on her children "

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Happily married

"Loved d ending as karma is a bitch n it has been shown here n no matter how much pure souls suffer in start dey always hav a happy ending "

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HM Alternative

"Although he missed treated Audrey, the one person that truly loved him unconditionally. I was still hoping that he would have another chance at finding someone to love him again. Think about it please."

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Alternative Endings

"Am so happy about the ending This novel has taught me alot,there is more to marriage than just love Am happy Audrey got a happy ending she deserves it 🥰"

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All of the choices.

"I loved this story, you couldn’t have encouraged my hate and spite for Calvin any more. I can picture all of the endings. What a brilliant way to give the reader so many options to get the ending they wanted. I would say proof reading is key, we went through stages where names had been mixed up. Either way, I’m going to read the rest of your books and I’m totally sure I’m gonna love them all! ♥️"

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Very nice but will Calvin get any happy ending too??

"Will Calvin get any happy ending too?"

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Serves him right

"There was a few glitches but over all it ended the way it should have. Calvin got all he deserved but it's kind of creepy how he held on for so long and grew an attachment to Audrey's children like an obsession over everything about her. Surprising as time went by that Audry and Calvin didn't stumble into each other at any giving time. But I guess that's a part of being apart and away .I'm glad joe and Darcy stayed together but 6 kids goodness 😁"

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HM alternative endings

"Hi there love, I read happily married and blissful aftermath at my lowest point, my bf of 5 years left me for another woman, I had lost my dream internship and my parents weren't speaking to me, books were my only escape and your story particularly touched me a lot and gave me the strength that I didn't know I needed, thankyou so much for that now I'm gonna graduate at the top of my class and I am starting my own venture I am in a much better place than I was 5 year's ago,I hope you write more stories and I wish you all success and happiness and great health in the world"

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Love it

"I like the fact that you made an alternative ending this is really good "

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Excellent

"LOVE these alternatives! I've such a complicated relationship with Calvin. I hated his guts for whatever he's done to Audrey but at the same time I wish he had been able to get over his past mistakes and grow into a better man in his next relationship(s). The fact that he hasn't, gutted me a little because I can somewhat understand pining over "the one that got away". I hope despite this particular piece of him, he's still able to have his bits of happiness with his family/friends/gf(s)😊"

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Alternate ending 3

"I like this ending a lot. It gave Calvin some redeeming factor, being alone for the rest of his life and be given the chance to make everything right by looking after Audrey's son, akin to being his own. "

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Happily Married

"Audrey really portrayed a woman with masochistic personality, and I love how the story went to her being able to overcame that weakness. I felt sad for Calvin because he had taken her for granted… and he had suffered the consequences of his evil actions…so self-centered and selfish… It pissed me off in book 2 that Audrey is like a very stupid girl, always pushing people away… I love the alternate endings where Calvin took in Audrey’s son under his company… at least he can have someone who is very close to her love’s heart. "

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Blissful aftermath

"Well done really enjoyed your book. Read 3 back to back. Well written, good plot and very few spelling mistakes (that I noticed) "

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Fav

"I loved this little series you written. "

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