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"You might want to proofread before uploading. I'm not a big stickler for grammar, but spelling I am. Plus, you skipped over some stuff necessary to make the story more understandable. "
"You might want to proofread before uploading. I'm not a big stickler for grammar, but spelling I am. Plus, you skipped over some stuff necessary to make the story more understandable. "