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Very dark

"This book is dark and reminds me of some of the dark i have had in my own life i cant wait to see how it plays out"

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Hunters prey

"Please update soon. Can't wait to read more. "

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OMG!!!

"Need more soon. So many ideas of what could happen best"

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Eeeekk

"Thrilling, excitement, not for the faint of heart. Cat and mouse"

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Hunters Prey

"Why do I love stories like this. OMG.......I just want to keep reading. I LOVE your story. It's sick and cruel, but Hot. Hopefully it will be updated soon. Thank you so much for your story. "

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Interesting read

"Interesting read...."

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Good

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Hunters Prey

"Other than a few misspelled words this author is on their way to a great book so far. I personally hope Hunter changes his tune or gets an ass thumping from her gay friend Dustin I think it was. "

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Hunters prey

"Great story I'm hooked"

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Good

"Good so far"

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The bully

"Sad but good story"

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Hunters prey

"Amazing! Can't wait for more "

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Interesting so far

"I’m pulled in already—wondering why he’s torturing her as he already has a girlfriend, but seems to be attracted to Claire but doesn’t want to be. Curious as to what he did to her the night before."

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Good plot

"Story is a little rushed but it's very interesting. I like the psychological component it has."

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Dsc

"I am barely skimming through the story. It not my cup of tea but i guess some may enjoy it. Keep it up."

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