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The Clockwork Apprentice

"So far so great. Maybe shades of the Sorceror's Apprentice with the protagonist being a bionic protector with a dog and 2 attractive girls (1 real and one virtual) and a talking book as companions. The new chapters are adding new story lines and depth. "

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Apprentice clockwork

"The book is very interesting I like the main character and I hope the story continues further and I would. Like it if you made aegis get his hand back "

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Gollum.

"The begining, is fairly standard 3, the start off the world 4, okej, the writing off the story, easy to read 5. Story nice."

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Quite Interesting

"Enjoyable and would look forward for an update. Keep up the good work "

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