Inkitt
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good like it as one shot

"good like it. i think it need bit more flair but other than that really good better than most oneshots"

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Awesome

"Great ficlet. One of those that makes you want to know what happens next. You remembered that Hermione would use her Gryfindor courage and Draco his Slitherin cunning. It almost felt like the kiss was Hermione's way of making Draco go away and it failed spectacularly. Awesome work Cyndy."

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