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A scream echoed through the halls, followed by the muffled sound of a man crying. Metal fell on the floor and the sound resonated through the room.
“I hereby curse you,” A voice thundered, shaking the very foundations of the building, addressing the crying man hugging himself. “You will be named War and wherever you walk, people will take their lives looking at you. In a thousand years, when your lust for revenge dies and you beg to have this removed, I will come down once more. Not to relieve you of your sin, but to shut you in the abyss of hell, where you will wait until the end of time. Until you are called upon once more.”
*Picture in the cover belongs to its rightful owner.*
Title: Simple, straight to the point. Blurb: Fits the title. Intriguing. I wonder how he would handle a modern world though. Cover: Simple as well. Looks like a Halsey song and Billie Eilish song combined. Plot Stuff: It's a short prologue, but it packs a massive punch. It's harsh. How could someone who was addicted to war be given such a harsh curse? We shall find out!
Technical stuff: None to report. Other than that, hmmmmmm.....
Hey there!
I just finished reading your story and… wow. I’m honestly still thinking about it. Your writing pulled me right in, the characters, the emotions, the atmosphere, it all felt so real and immersive.
As I was reading, I couldn’t help but picture it as a comic. The way you build scenes and tension? It would shine with visuals. I’m a freelance artist, and I specialize in turning powerful stories like yours into vivid, emotionally-driven comics. I’d be beyond excited to collaborate with you and bring your world to life on the page.
No pressure at all! I just wanted to reach out in case this is something you’ve ever thought about. If you're curious or just wanna chat more about the idea, feel free to hit me up anytime on
Discord : Lizziedoesitall
Thanks again for creating such an incredible story. Truly inspiring stuff.
Hope to talk soon!
Warmly,
Lizzie