What is your opinion?
Enchanted
"Need more stories.. Keep it up dear. "
Marvellous
"Unique of its own kind"
Awesome
"Great work"
Great
"Really a heart touching story"
Good but too short
"I enjoyed the story, but i feel like it's missing something, like the story itself needs improvement. It's a good story to read and a recommend for suspense lovers. I actually thought it would be longer seeing how it's only a chapter but it was just about how david got the stone and..regretted his decision as he couldn't see again, but then, what happens next? nothing, just says it's the devil stone as mentioned in the summary. So typically, it's repeating the same as already said in the summary only showing how? the book says completed so i don't know if the author might consider writing more, cos the reading was really good but the ending was.....i'm sorry but weird. good but weird. I'm happy there weren't really grammatical errors which was very much impressing as most authors have that, but in a sentence, it says "david was lying holding david stone". You're repeating his name, instead of maybe saying "David was lying holding the stone" or "david was lying down holding the stone". I must say while reading this, one has to pay very much attention, if not it could get confusing in a second After all, it's a good read, so i hope to see more of your books"
