50/50

"I'm not sure how I feel about this story. Most of the time I'm usually left knowing how I feel about a particular story. I liked how the story started, very intriguing to say the least. the overall flow was very good and things were well co-ordinated. The fiction is good and somewhat realistic. The sentences are simple and basic, the overall look of the book itself is nice. The characters also seemed pleasant. But the story itself was very vauge and the descriptions weren't quite in depth. I personally didn't find the story very engaging. There were also some slight editing mistakes here and there and the story felt like it was going downhill from chapter 7. The details became less and less and it felt as if instead of being shown, we were being told in a rush. Although the air of mystery was there, nothing particularly seemed to change and the charcters became less and less interesting. The book is not that bad, but it needs some touches here and there."