What is your opinion?
Firey
"Good story, wish it didn’t have so many A/N’s it spoilt the flow.. overall it was a great book, please pad out characters and rewrite it.."
Idk
"Love the book so far, we’ll written and exciting"
Nightfall
"Liked everything about this short story"
Mrs
"A very fast paced good read. It keeps twisting nicely. Please keep writing. Plus a sense of humor is in the plot. Very nice"
Nightfall
"It was a cute short story. Sam is a fiesta girl. Keith is her keep her on level ground Alpha. I loved reading."
Nightfall
"Defo a good read for a short story.. n plenty going on. Well done author 👍"
Really like the plot.
"You did great. It was actually fun to read. You didn't drag things out. Maybe the opposite...lol. But, I enjoyed it."
Cute and funny
"This is a real cute short novel. Would loved to read a longer more detailed novel but the writer kept getting writers block which is understandable. Over all a great lil cosmic story and will read more of your stories. Keep up the great work "
Nightfall
"Wonderful short story loved it ❤"
Mate
"Love the story"
Clarrissa
"The journey home."
Very Good
"To short ... but ovetall I love it"
Just not my thing.
"This is a very fast paced story with short chapters, but for what it is it's not terrible. I have read far worse story's with far worse writing. think it would have benefited from more structure to the plot during the planning stage but i really never felt lost and for the most part knew what was going on."
A good start
"Ok it was the authors first book - congratulations 👏 I can say I loved the authors style. The character's little quips and inner thoughts written in was very funny and made the story much better for me. Now for some criticism- the chapters were lottle short, more like paragraphs. There was no back story and the brief chapters prevented you from becomming invested, empathising or connecting to the characters. Also there wasnt much of a storyline. I think the author has talent but needs to read more on the genre or anything really to get a feel for giving the story more depth. There were also a few punctuation errors, like no spaces after ful stops commas etc, though that can also be platform quirks. I definitely think the author is talented and wth more practice can only get even better. I'm sorry not to be able to give it better marks but from the other works ive read I cant give it more. Thanks for the hard work and keep writing ! Luvs x"
