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Amazing 🤩

"Omg such a great book can’t wait to see how it developed "

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Wonderful

"Can’t wait for book two !!! Elsie and Cain need their happy ending ❤️"

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Cain

"Punctuation and grammar, including spelling errors are really distracting. The writing style tends toward rambling at times, could be more concise, less internal. The plot is interesting though. "

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A resurrection spell that goes hilariously wrong

"Bringing back one dog and accidentally raising an entire graveyard is a great comedic disaster to open on, but what got me was the turn underneath it - Elsie isn't reckless, she's overpowered and undertrained, and she's terrified of ending up like her mother. That's a much more interesting problem than "clumsy witch messes up spells." Followed and favorited, curious what she does with that power once Cain is involved."

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Cain

"I like the action described in the story . Some spelling is in correct. Excuting reading this . Like to read about teen agers and wizards The plot is okay . Nice and relaxing . Enjoyed reading this. "

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