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I love your stories.🥰

"I love your stories and hope you continue to write. If you ever publish anymore please let me know. You are an amazing write."

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Love it

"Finally a book longer than 2-3 chapters, and it was complete, with no weird blanks or missing parts. I would recommend reading this. "

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Really Good Story

"I was pleasantly surprised by how good this story was. I didn't expect it to be bad, I just wasn't expecting the slight angst & HEA components. Which is what made the story so good to me... Those are 2 of my favorite tropes! This is definitely a story I'll read more than once! 💜💜"

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Lovely story

"Sweet story. Short but hits all the important points"

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Feeding Daddy

"Well, I’ve got to say highly unusual, but so cute, funny & interesting❣️Very entertaining, dear author, you have a profusion of ideas & situations to keep us hooked🤗👏🏼👏🏼👏🏼🇦🇺"

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Feeding Daddy

"Short and sweet I've really enjoyed reading every minute of this book. Looking forward to other works from this great author"

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Love it!

"Loved it! I do wish it was longer though, was a good read! And can’t wait to read more of your work! "

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feeding daddy

"kinda hot ngl😅"

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Feeding Daddy

"The books great i loved it "

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Feeding Daddy

"Short but lovely 💛."

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Feeding Daddy

"Unique plot, enjoyable even though I hope for more. It's kinda short but amazing. "

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Feeding daddy

"Rewrite the book inti a much thicker one that is how good it is "

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Amazing

"At first I didn't think I was going to like the book because of the whole breast feeding thing. But as I started reading I got sucked in and couldn't stop. "

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Wow!

"If we knew everyone’s hang up/ needs...."

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So sweet!

"Such a sweet short story. Would definitely love to read more of this ♡"

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Beautiful Story

"I love the story very much and I just want to know if it would have more added to this Beautiful Story. Thanks again ❤❤❤❤❤❤❤"

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there should have been more suckling of her teat

"well, i found this quite interesting and i felt compelled to continue reading ... so i'd say, pretty good ... it was a wonderful "love"story, his desire for her milk was marvellous but i noticed after the beginning no suckling ... why ... it's astory about lactation, and he should have suckled her more during his recovery, but overall it was an o.k. story "

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Qwery

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Nice

"It's an ok book fast paced no beating about with it few more details wouldn't hurt but other than that was a quick read"

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My daddy

"Cute quick read "

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