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🥰🥰🥰🥰❤️
"I am really liking these so much The can’t go a day without Paige type of like "
- कुल रेटिंग
- कहानी
- लेखन शैली
- व्याकरण और विराम चिह्न
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It's fantastic i fucked enjoyed it, author fighting 💪🏻
"First I lked the novel plot its amaizin and also the story that was being portrayed and I recommend this novel to anyone who's interested in fantasy mxm books, guys let this be your first priority and the book deceived th rating tht has been chosen 💪🏻💪🏻"
- कुल रेटिंग
- कहानी
- लेखन शैली
- व्याकरण और विराम चिह्न
क्या यह रिव्यू आपके लिए मददगार था?
38 चैप्टर पढ़े
Crazy in love with this book
"I love everything from this book. It's give me many type of feelings, sad, happy, excited etc. Loveeeee ittttt"
- कुल रेटिंग
- कहानी
- लेखन शैली
- व्याकरण और विराम चिह्न
क्या यह रिव्यू आपके लिए मददगार था?
35 चैप्टर पढ़े
I loved ittt
"I enjoyed everything about this book it was really entertaining to read 🧚🏽❤️"
- कुल रेटिंग
- कहानी
- लेखन शैली
- व्याकरण और विराम चिह्न
क्या यह रिव्यू आपके लिए मददगार था?
17 चैप्टर पढ़े
Wow.
"I really loved this book. Will there be a part 2 .... like is Jamie his twin brother... Also will paige be able to be intimate with Warren again??🤔🤩🤩🤩"
- कुल रेटिंग
- कहानी
- लेखन शैली
- व्याकरण और विराम चिह्न
क्या यह रिव्यू आपके लिए मददगार था?
39 चैप्टर पढ़े
Captive [MXM]
"When I first saw this book, my only intentions were to skim through the book but not read it. Soon I found myself addicted to the story and finishing it in one sitting. Amazing book author, I loved it."
- कुल रेटिंग
- कहानी
- लेखन शैली
- व्याकरण और विराम चिह्न
क्या यह रिव्यू आपके लिए मददगार था?
39 चैप्टर पढ़े
I recommend
"I would recommend this to anyone whos into BDSM it was fantastic. I absolutly hated it when he called Jakob daddy, oh god it was bad, and thats the good part, i was sooo wrapped up in the story and feeling 👌👌👌👌👌👌"
- कुल रेटिंग
- कहानी
- लेखन शैली
- व्याकरण और विराम चिह्न
क्या यह रिव्यू आपके लिए मददगार था?
39 चैप्टर पढ़े
Interesting start.
"The beginning has a nice hook - the psychology of a relationship and unhealthy dynamics, accepting oneself and one's desires despite societal "norms",. I would have like to see Paige seek counseling, too. Warren isn't the only one with issues and the only thing he does is use Jacob to see what a "healthy" DD/lb could be like but... SPOILERS: For me the whole thing fell apart when Jacob kidnaps Paige -it became an entirely different story then. Any progress Paige had made in understanding himself just becomes a manipulation by Jacob who we now discover is a warlock? Paige becomes entirely manipulative and a murderer. wtw? Also I don't read what Jacob did as rape when he would never have touched Paige that way without Paige's insistence. If Maeve was going to help him couldn't she have just gone a gotten Warren to begin with? Some of the dialogue is a little stilted and sometimes seems out of character. Also it would have been nice to see Warren and Paige actually talk through what they mean to each other and want going forward. It's a good structure I just think (imho here) that the characters and plot could be fleshed out a bit more."
- कुल रेटिंग
- कहानी
- लेखन शैली
- व्याकरण और विराम चिह्न
क्या यह रिव्यू आपके लिए मददगार था?
38 चैप्टर पढ़े
Interesting read
"I loved the twist in the story."
- कुल रेटिंग
- कहानी
- लेखन शैली
- व्याकरण और विराम चिह्न
क्या यह रिव्यू आपके लिए मददगार था?
35 चैप्टर पढ़े
Captive
"I didn't exactly feel what the main lead was feeling and that was a little letdown, but overall it is a good book, with intresting plot. Thank you for making it "
- कुल रेटिंग
- कहानी
- लेखन शैली
- व्याकरण और विराम चिह्न
क्या यह रिव्यू आपके लिए मददगार था?
37 चैप्टर पढ़े
help the plot is fighting to exist at this point
"the plot is a disaster like it’s great that the duality of the characters was attempted to be shown but it was done terribly, they just seem to have the worst mood swings and maybe it’s because shit happens that is not shown but it still needs to be mentioned for a smooth plot like maybe write down what the plot is supposed to be in detail"
- कुल रेटिंग
- कहानी
- लेखन शैली
- व्याकरण और विराम चिह्न
क्या यह रिव्यू आपके लिए मददगार था?
38 चैप्टर पढ़े
Book
"I have enjoyed reading this book so far. Jacobs place in his life was kind of easier to pick up on. He was too nice"
- कुल रेटिंग
- कहानी
- लेखन शैली
- व्याकरण और विराम चिह्न
क्या यह रिव्यू आपके लिए मददगार था?
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Bipolar
"Everyone in this story has terrible mood swings The dialogues seem out of character or misplaced sometimes Paige doesn't want to move on He's in a relationship with jakob but keeps coming back to warren while calling him daddy and simultaneously telling him he doesn't love him He literally said to warren that he has a chance to make things okay while he was in a relationship with jakob The dom sub dynamic is really off too The plot isn't very well developed There's no clarification for some if the stuff The beginning was interesting but I can't take it anymore "
- कुल रेटिंग
- कहानी
- लेखन शैली
- व्याकरण और विराम चिह्न
क्या यह रिव्यू आपके लिए मददगार था?