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A game of fate

"I didn’t like how they made hermione and harry have sex I mean there in the middle of a war zone there’s no time for that and I don’t know I just don’t really see Harry and hermione together and I don’t think he would go so far as to kill himself and the first chapter made no sense but overall I liked it and think you did a great job 🙂"

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