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Bear fights for Donna: book 4 dark rider series
"I just love the stories you write. The characters and plot are awesome. Grammer needs work but other than that alls good. Nothing to dislike about your stories. Thank you for being an amazing writer. "
Bear fights with donna book 4 : dark rider
"Well done!! Thank you for sharing your story with me "
Dark rider mc series
"I am hoping there will be more chapters on it here as you don't have to pay to read it on but on the reading app Hey Novel you can read so much and then you gotta watch ads to read which is fine but they only give you a total of 6 chapters with the ad watching and then you gotta have coins. I would rather read it in here but the hey novel app has over 200 chapters."
Book
"Good but confusing "
Love it the best
"Finally,the 4 girls find there men an they are very happy "
Great Read
"😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊"
Love it
"I hope you White Brooklyn story it would be Nice to see what happens to her."
Lilbit1976
"Love these books. "
Bear fights for Donna Book4 Dark Rider
"The story was good but confusing, at first I thought it was about Donna and then it was directed towards Brooklyn. "
Dark riders Mc book 4
"Yet another book I have not been able to put down."
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"This is a pretty interesting story. I suggest you join NovelStar’s writing competition this April."
Bear fights For Donna Book 4 Dark Rider MC
"I hope she gets her happiness "
Bear fights for Donna
"I’m glad the women got even and I Hoe Brooklyn does give dreamer a chance "
Book
"Enjoyable book, wish Donna's character would finally be happy she's been through so much.. Not impressed how cherokee turned out I was rooting for him and Donna when they first met "
Plz update soon
"Wow good so far plz update soon I hope Donna and Bear make it would love to see them happy"
NEED CLOSURE
"NEEDS FOLLOW UP ON THE CHARACTERS."
Book 4
"This series was a great read but book 4 has me confused…What’s with the ending ? Is there going to be another book as this doesn’t seem like it’s finished…"
Bear fights for Donna: Book 4: Dark Rider MC series
"I really loved Books 1-3 and thought Book 4 was going to be just as good and a continuation of the series but it seemed to be a stand alone book and nothing to do with the series. I think @whisper5531 would be best writing stand alone books if he/she can't keep names, people, couples, places, MC's, etc... the same. I do want to say that @whisper5531 can write books; something I don't think that I could accomplish myself. "
Dark Rider 4
"I read these four books and although the story had some interesting twists and turns, it could have been better. Maybe when you write you could keep notes on your characters, their family tree, their back story, who they end up with and what happens to them. I also don’t really get the titles of the series. Bear gets his woman, but it stops being about Bear. Book 2 on Ryan was the same. It ended up NOT being about Ryan. I’m all for drama in books, but the drama in Dove’s life was heartbreaking and a bit much. Confusing names e.g. the whore Bear got pregnant was named Tammy and then she was Kelly. Your stories are interesting, but they seriously need to be edited. Too many mistakes. Keep writing, keep improving and don’t be shy to ask for help. 👍🏼👍🏼"
Bear Fights For Donna Book 4: Dark Rider MC Series
"This book was really good, but very confusing at the same time. It is hard to tell where the dialogue begins and ends. I give this book 4 stars."
