What is your opinion?
My beautiful mates
"I like that I am intrigued with the storyline. I don't like how long it's taking to get to read more."
Absolutelly awesome!!
"This is really cool and I really enjoy reading this story!! I really hope that this story has a happy ending."
Love it
"I like the book so much..... now i cant wait to read what else you got in store for us in this book"
Hi great novel
"I will give 20 star if they let me ."
My beautiful mates
"I like everything about this story it has had my attention science the first page. The one thing I don't like is the miss spelled word I have had to lose myself just to understand what I was reading. So I had to read it over. I would recommend this to anyone. "
POV chancges
"Too many POV changes, but I still like the story"
Good story but writing way to juvenile .
"The premise is good, the idea of the storyline good, the writing on the other hand is o horrible, so childlike, so juvenile that it makes getting lost in the story very difficult. As the reader I’m to busy cringing, at the grammar and sentence structure, correcting simple spelling and sentence structure mistakes to truly enjoy the story. The characters are a bit to 1 dimensional, not a lot of substance or personality. Needs a lot of work but again the story idea is really good and interesting. "
