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He stood there, nodding his head as I ridiculed his behavior. I watched in disbelief as the corners of his lips turned up, displaying an innocent smile. 'What is wrong with him?' I thought to myself. He was just about to get run over. My hands clutched onto his shoulders and without giving it a second thought, I started to try and shake him back to his consciousness. He seemed like he was preoccupied with a few thoughts or maybe just day-dreaming, who knows. "Are you really going to ignore me? Why don't you at least thank me?" His eyes narrowed down on my lips. I felt heat rushing up my cheeks and just turned away, in anger or embarrassment, I wasn't sure. How could someone be so bold to just stare down at another person's lips when they were right in front of them? "Aria," someone called from behind me. I turned to see a young girl, carrying a small book, with a title I couldn't exactly catch. "He can't hear you. My brother right here", she says pointing at the boy who had his eyes on my lips, "is deaf".
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Ku_Rolet: The novel was good, and I really enjoyed reading it. I love the leads and their bond, but I have one question that confused me. How could Tristan have been dreaming about his mate since he was a child if Omara was already mated to someone else before him? If Kyle had accepted Omara, would Tristan ne...
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Mary Wilkins: This was an enjoyable short story. Well done! 😄👏🏾👏🏾
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Dracyy: I really enjoyed this entire book and I am definitely looking forward to seeing more from this very talented author! The buildup of emotions was phenomenal. We went along for the ride as they went from strangers to partners. Recommended reading for young adults on up.
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Kelley: Love the story line! Ryder needs to getvhiavhead out of his ass tho!
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user-za6B61FpQY: The story is great. I think we could have waited a lottle longer for them to get together,
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blair: THIS IS SO GOOD I LOVE IT IM GONNA READ IT LATER BC IM TIRED BC I JUST FINISHED WRITING 10 CHAPTERS IN 1 DAY!
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jo987_123: This is a good story, but it needs a good editor to go through this iteration and fix the mistakes. The pov changes from 1st person to 3rd person, often, and sometimes within one sentence. It needs a liberal sprinkling of punctuation marks throughout, and a decision needs to be made about the char...
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