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He stood there, nodding his head as I ridiculed his behavior. I watched in disbelief as the corners of his lips turned up, displaying an innocent smile. 'What is wrong with him?' I thought to myself. He was just about to get run over. My hands clutched onto his shoulders and without giving it a second thought, I started to try and shake him back to his consciousness. He seemed like he was preoccupied with a few thoughts or maybe just day-dreaming, who knows. "Are you really going to ignore me? Why don't you at least thank me?" His eyes narrowed down on my lips. I felt heat rushing up my cheeks and just turned away, in anger or embarrassment, I wasn't sure. How could someone be so bold to just stare down at another person's lips when they were right in front of them? "Aria," someone called from behind me. I turned to see a young girl, carrying a small book, with a title I couldn't exactly catch. "He can't hear you. My brother right here", she says pointing at the boy who had his eyes on my lips, "is deaf".
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Aelyn Raven: Wieder eine tolle Geschichte. Leider bin ich erst jetzt dazu gekommen sie zu lesen, aber das tut der Geschichte keinen Abbruch *g* ich freue mich schon auf den nächsten Adventskalender
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Silvia: Sehr schön geschrieben, mit Spannung von Anfang bis Ende. Tolle Geschichte .
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Xonereth: I really enjoyed this story. It was pretty straightforward plot wise, uncomplicated. Loved the characters and the world. It unfolded at a good pace. Keep writing and I will definitely check out your other works!
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C.: Ich habe so oft herzhaft gelacht. Was für eine tolle Geschichte. So schön geschrieben. So schön, flüssig lesbar. Ich lieb‘s. Mir tun die Herren in der Geschichte fast leid, die Frauen sind reine Naturgewalten. Lustig, verschmitzt, offen, direkt. So schön. Danke für diese Geschichte und das wir sie l...
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Obsidian: He's hilarious. Like, actually. I loved it. You're writing style is great, although you could do with a few less murmurs and mutters. I know it sounds critical, but I have the same problem and I hate it. Overall, it was one of the best stories I've read on here so far. I liked it better than those M...
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