Quite good!

"This was a pretty good read. Your writing style is quite simple, yet very descriptive in such details that I can very much envision everything that's going on. I thought the couple years going by in the next few chapters was an interesting way of progressing the story enough for this new gang the 'Angels' to raise up in numbers and influence and I really wasn't expecting the ending of this first part. The characters are written well in a way that doesn't seem like the lack depth and growth, which some beginner writers have trouble writing characters in a way that engage in are emotions. I saw at least on spelling mistake, but it was very minor and doesn't distract from the story. Overall this was a good start to the series and I'm interested on knowing what happens next and so I go on reading the next part. Good job so far. "