What is your opinion?
Quite good!
"By far, one of the good books I've read of this genre. I've enjoyed practically everything about this book from it's characters to the way in which the story itself had been constructed. The writing style, was the greatest part of the story, in my opinion. It provides a hook that baits the reader before catching them and never letting them go. The characters are all unique and extremely well-written, each one having an extra layer to them that makes them seem three-dimensional and more lively overall. Their humanity makes it easy to go along with the story and understand where each character's loyalty lies, what their personality is, and what their reasons are for doing the thing they do. It's plot is also one that I find quite engaging. I've read many books that attempt to accomplish the same goals this story has with their plot, taking place in a different genre's with a bit of romance and action. Most of those stories wind up being cliché in what might possibly be the worst way ever. Through, here, the reader gets to see/read the character growth. Everything about the story so makes it pretty memorable and easy to recall. Anyway mistakes in grammar/spelling and such are seem as nothing major and don't distract from the story. Overall this is a pretty good story and I'll recommend this to anyone who likes supernatural and fantasy! "
Yes!
"What a unique concept! It pulled me in before I even started reading. I love that the MC isn’t one of the ones affected by the awakening-it’s a cool twist on the trope that she’s unique as a protagonist, but it presents a fun irony because she’s ‘ordinary’, which is what makes her rare. I feel like I explained that badly but I guess what I’m saying is that her being ordinary in a supernatural world is very compelling. The writing style is good, maybe a touch wordy here and there, but nothing crazy. Overall great job! :) "
Great
"So far, so good. First of all, the flow of the scenarios are great, and how detailed you describe the image of a scene is great too. The diversity of the guardians is new to me, which is good, because some would just be representing the earth's elements, some would just be vampires, you know. What's great about fantasy genres is that anything could happen so, looking forward to what's next in store."
Spine Chillingly Awesome
"I love this story so far. The details are amazing, so well crafted. The scenes involving her friend during the turning raised the hairs on my air, sending chills up my spine. It was so intense and well written. Especially her own turning, it was freaky but that's when you know how good it is. The concept is so unique, very interesting. There were some punctuation errors, namely missing commas. Before a conjunction like 'but' or 'and', there is supposed to be a comma. Also, with dialogue, when the dialogue ends, it is supposed to end with a comma unless the final sentence ends with a question mark or exclamation mark. Other than that, your story is incredible. You are such a talented writer. I can't wait for more. Keep writing!"
