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But peace must end

"The book continues seamless where the first book ended. It is truly turning into another epic fantasy series. Cannot wait to see the next installment."

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The anmah series

"I am so in love with this story! Extremely well written. I'm shocked such a professionally written story is free! A lot of good stories on inkitt but this is most definitely the best I have read so far! I love that the love story isn't too much either. Can't wait to read the next book! Thank you author! "

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But peace must end

"2 yrs its taken me to read again and your books have been the first ive been able to read ... thankyou for the begining your first book was written so well ...ive just finished book 2 and now will start book3"

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But Peace Must End

"I reached the end of the book without even realizing it. Totally enjoying the storyline this far."

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But Peace Must End - The Anmah Series Book 2

"This second book of the Anmah Series was as awesome as the first story, I disagree with spare runner. The names were ordinary names with different spellings, which I for one loved. I am now going to read the third book in this amazingly awesome story!"

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Disagreement

"I read the other review of this book and I must say that I disagree with it wholeheartedly. I do not believe the author put the apostrophes in the names just to be unique, but because the characters are supposedly of a different race than humans. They are Anmah. They should have different names and yes, even different spellings of those names. And if the other reviewer is not adept enough at reading to keep the characters straight, then I feel sorry for him or her. I had no problem keeping them straight. I think this series is an incredible one that should get published as soon as possible."

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okay concept, iffy execution

"I've got to be honest, I can't finish this. I can't get past the names long enough to follow the plot. seriously here, when every name is some jumble of syllables with no meaning, the reader has to spend more time trying to to remember who each person is than actually reading and sinking into the story. and the whole ap'ostrophe naming convention is horrible. fine, spell Gabriel as gabriyel if you have to. but throwing an apostrophe into a name just to make it "unique" is just a boring and distracting habit. it's perfectly fine to just write out Gabriel and Michael without distracting from the real writing by changing spellings and adding useless apostrophes. when you get ten pages into a story and you can't remember how it started because there's already a half dozen names with strange spellings and no character behind them, what's the point of continuing?"

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