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Cliffhanger

"Seems good story but disjointed at times. Can make the connection but could be smoother"

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Great

"The characters are well written . I love the character Lesley, her humours and sarcastic attitude . It's so good . Please keep writing you are very talented "

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The Lottery mate #2

"Brilliant 🎉🎉"

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Hooked!!

"I started Book 1 this morning and I’m jones’in to keep going thru Book 2. "

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Like the story, but it's incomplete

"Te read the story on Novelstar... hmm for me the power was right out of it. Don't know what happened there. "

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Second chance

"I would recommend this book to anyone who likes to read fiction. I think for a sixteen year old girl she has lots of tricks up her sleeve "

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Lottery mate

"I like Lesley character because sye is strojgcand ambition despite what she had endure with the abuse from her uncle. She did not let that break her at all and that wyat l like about her."

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Second chance

"Great read"

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The lottery mate

"20 isnt the last chapter this book is on another app and I'm on chapter 53 but it charges to much for coins so was hoping this app I could read the rest of the book."

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Great

"Spelling as well as proper wording would give this story 5 stars all around. Great story so far otherwise"

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second chance

"love the story. the story has a great story to it and you cant get wait to see what happens next"

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Alpha

"I can’t wait to see what happens next"

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Very entertaining

"Read the 1st and had to immediately go to the 2nd. Great job"

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Second chance #2 of the lottery mate

"Enjoyed reading this book. I’m looking forward to reading more and to know what happens "

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Soooo addictive

"This emotionally rollercoaster ride is so addictive. Its a “one-chapter-more” feeling all the way through. Tamar is never letting you off the hook. Book one is neccessary to understand this book and give it depht and character but this book is far more enjoyable and romantic. "

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Second chances -#2 of The lottery mate

"I am absolutely in love with this story. Again, I would expect nothing less from this author! All of your stories are so fantastic. This one has got me on the edge of my seat just waiting for Leslie to tell Cedric the truth! I can't wait to finish!"

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Second Chances

"Wow! She just can’t catch a break 🥲🥲🥲"

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Les

"Good story "

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LOVE IT

"I love EVERYTHING about this story. I have read it a few times actually AND hoping for more from these 2 somehow down the line!!!! Tamar is wonderful at her writing and my top fave"

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Review

"I like that it's very realistically. I mean Lesley is 16 and she reacts like that for real "

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