This was nice.

"I've said this a lot but now it's official now, your stories are perfect for something short and quick. No strings to lengthen the process, quick and sweet. Very admirable. I love this. I loved Ryder, I loved Laina. The story was good! there were no editing mistakes, excellent descriptions, good flow, and an excellent ending. And I read it under half an hour, short, all the questions answered which left me satisfied. have I said this story is good? Although, I recommend you space out the story a little bit more. It makes it look neater since there are parts where there are many paragraphs then others just seemed cramped together. That's all!! ^_^"