I loved this!!

"I loved how this went. The flow, descriptions, and structure were wonderful. I especially loved the dialogues and thoughts on Nerin. They were simple yet they completely made her seem like a mermaid, unknown to the human world. The characters themselves were a work of art. Merrick being abandoned by his crewmates and Nerin with a troubling brother. The story solved itself in a very beautiful way and it was outstanding. Blackeye was also interesting and I could very well picture him with the descriptions you gave. It was a short read but it told a lot which was very outstanding. well, Constance, you do have your way with short stories and I was mindblown by this one. There were few editing mistakes, especially from chapter three. The story is still great none-the-less and it was a sweet quick read. I'm beyond impressed!"