What is your opinion?
Wowza
"Hey girl, itsa me, Emily! (Same username as on FF) That was good, like really good! I'm glad you asked me to take a look, this sounds like the beginning of a great story, and I haven't read many in a long while! (: Also, are you posting this on fanfiction...net too? I don't get on Inkitt too often anymore xD lol Keep it up dude, this is great. Emily"
Neat fanfiction
"Although I do not know what this is based off of, I enjoyed this quite a bit. I felt like it was a very powerful story, and I liked the way that you conveyed the relationship between Jace and Clary. I was really worried about him losing her, so you did a great job engaging me as a reader. The beginning had a good draw to it. I would have liked to know more about what attacked them and why, but perhaps if I knew the fandom I would better understand. Also, I have a thing for fight scenes, so I think that it would add some entertainment if you would have described the fight a little more. I also really liked the interaction toward the end between Alec and Jace. It was believable. There were some grammatical errors and places where you used the wrong word, but it wasn't very distracting. Great work! I'd love to read more by this author! :)"
