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Great Story!

"I loved this story, I truly did! Your a great writer but when you're writing about a character from a show, you really need to become them (in a way) Meruem, so quickly accepting his love? Doesn't sound real. Meruem, yelling NOOOO! seems kinda made up on the spot. The story flows well and your spelling, grammar, and punctuation are all very good. But I would suggest really getting to know the characters to write a very good story. With all good intentions, -Xylophone Beach"

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Interpretation of the King's Mind

"It is a great story that captures important and memorable scenes of Hunter x Hunter's Chimera Ants arc, interestingly told from another point of view than that of the original story. Besides that idea being well executed and very well written, the attention to detail, which indicates a good assimilation and dedication to research a story that is not simple, is impressive. Recommended to everybody who enjoyed the fascinating Chimera Ants arc."

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Go on a feel ride :)

"The writer has absorbed the complete essence of mereum's character and has portrayed it beautifully with her words! She has done justice to every character and has taken the hunter X hunter fans on a feel trip! Being a huge fan Merumugi I thoroughly enjoyed reading the story and I definitely experienced a rollercoaster of emotions going through me while reading it! It's definitely a top notch work and would love to read more of her works ! And I would like to recommend this to all the readers irrespective of being HxH fans"

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