Heart of the Immortal

Bobbie Stull: Great writing style.

Hester: Very good, was short too the point , not lingering on the abuse, pity you didn’t let him step in earlier knowing the abuse was happening, but this is almost real for some women who have gone through it, just wish they could all have a princess at te end of thete tunnel

ILoveBooks: Excellent read! Strong characters. Engaging and captivating gently. Love love love this story. Thank you.

Bargara4670: This is a real feel-good love story. I enjoyed it very much. I'll certainly read more by this author.

lblomme: I always love a story where good overcomes evil. The sad start, the growth, and ultimate strength of the main character was well done. The story never lagged and ultimately delivered a happy ending even for characters who were less than stellar. Well done!

Teresa: The book is well done, brilliant in fact! Z

Ashley: I enjoyed the story. It was a short one so the fast pace fit. I think something should be put in to show a time jump between paragraphs like a "****" just to make it easier to follow when we skip to the next day week or month. Over all a good read.

barb7604: Very good story, but glad you are writing a longer version. The end came way to quick without any of the previous drama

caldwtd: A bit of sweet in a world of violence. I enjoyed this story, and angst of each character believing they should not have these feelings towards each other. I did struggle with her seeming to be a bad ass, but yet was always so negative about herself, her negativity was a bit too much for my liking, I...