Inkitt
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Interesting read

"Live at first sight. "

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18 Wishes

"It’s a nice reading novel/book. Thanks! I like it."

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Gripping

"Good plot and leaves you wanting more"

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Great story

"Aww I was hoping that wasn’t all! I love the story I hope there is going to be a second book to this!! 🥰"

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18 Wishes

"This was a very good story 🥰🥰🥰🥰"

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Love at first sight

"Beautiful short story. Johnny is really special. At least Syd found her happily ever after. I would really like to know what happens to Nash and Cade, it would be an interesting spin=off."

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18 wishes

"Likening said b4 it's a great book. I recomend people read it. "

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destiny

"nice story very romantic"

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Great story

"I loved the twist of the kidnapping but I did suspect something was gonna happen, but the pregnancy was to quick there is no way she could have been 6 weeks so early, but loved the story"

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Feedback

"It was a nice story but al little short"

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Johnny is just the sweetest...

"Johnny is just the sweetest... "

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It's amazing

"Like everything about this chapter and there is nothing to dislike"

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