What is your opinion?
Cute little story!
"I really loved this cute, little wholesome story! Only thing that was a little confusing was there wasn't always different lines for when different people were talking so I kept thinking Annabeth was still talking when it was Percy. Other than that, it was great!"
Perfect
"This story is excellent. It has the perfect combination of humour and romance."
Just...Wow
"I don't like to read romance and stuff but I decided to give it a go and can I just say that I am blown away. I love how you've managed to capture camp tradition, and you've managed to capture that Percabeth Fluff. You didn't like you know, create OOC characters and instead kept them how they should be. However, for me the writing style felt a bit too 'oh and'. And the fact that Percy is acting as if this is impossible, I just feel like he wouldn't act like that, and that aspect of his personality was a little off. But other than that, this is a great story, an amazing read."

