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What I've seen

"It's great hoping this to be updated tbh"

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Wooooow

"Loving it so far can’t wait for more "

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Unravelling

"I love love love this book The plot is great and even though it’s slow we see major character development in Avery and madden They are making breakthroughs in their relationship as well which is so lovely to see and I cannot wait for the author to keep updating because I love this couple so much ☺️"

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Unravelling

"This is such an emotional caring yet erotic book. I've loved reading it. The highs and lows of the characters has been written with so much feeling. Well done ❤❤"

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Definitely a favorite of mine

"This book gives me butterflies and blushes and sadness and laughter, so many emotions in one place. Definitely one of my favorites. I really hope there are more chapters to come"

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Unraveling

"I'm loving this story, just Sept me in and is so captivating. Written so well, I can feel the characters emotions."

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wowii ♡

"ommmmmmmmmg this is probably the best book on Inkitt. I’ve literally never read anything quite this awesome on this app. literally my heart goes out to the author. "

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Absolutely love it

"I liked everything the plot is so great some moments make me cry and remember so stuff that had happened to me. This story is really real life like."

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Unraveling

"I love the plot of this story. It's so entirely entertaining and I couldn't get enough. I can't wait to their future works. This was astounding 😊😉"

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Unraveling

"Love. Love.. Love... Hands down one of the best erotic straight or gay novels that I have read. Will definitely recommend it to others"

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Unraveling

"Wow! So hot, sexy sexy! What a cute gay couple ❤️"

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erm

"The book is good"

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unraveling

"the plot is amazing the characters are even better!! just began reading and i’m already waiting for more chapters super excited!!!"

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Unraveling

"This is the best story I have read in a while and the plot and the way the characters were set up was brilliant and can't wait for more!💖🔥"

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Awesome

"Absolutely love this!"

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Unraveling

"I am in love with this book and looking forward to seeing how each character grows.. honestly hope that both characters work up the nerve to tell one another how they feel before they both miss out. Can't wait to see the next update!"

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Avery and Madden

"really great, really sexy, really gay. the epiphany of a great erotica"

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Avery and Madden

"really great, really sexy, really gay. the epiphany of a great erotica"

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love, love love it!

"I will say, as far as realism goes, this book really lacks. But no one reads romance for realism I don't think. I genuinely love the characters and so far, I love the plot too. They're very oversexed people and I think they fit quite well together. I love the way you chose to introduce an antagonist into the mix and overall, as a developing writer, I think you did fantastic!"

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Unraveling

"The writing style is not what I'm accustomed to, especially in a romance novel. Oddly, I actually enjoy it. It kind of reminds me of a script from a sitcom and yet it's dramatic enough to still suit the story. I enjoy the characters very much, its a good example of "opposites attract." I hope the author continues to develop the characters because they both could very much use some personal growth. This is great, thank you so much for sharing your talent."

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