Back to Story
What is your opinion?
Character Development
"I wasn't sure what to label this. I am loving your story! Can't wait for the next chapter! The only comment I have is that I feel Cole's character needs to be flushed out or minimalized more. He meets her once and is all BAM. I also need her relationship with Elil to more solidified. Right now Eli and Cole seem to be same level which doesn't seem true to to the story."
Wonderful cute story
"It is a cute story so far I am enjoying the book very much thank you "
