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Lovely little read

"This is a wonderful peek into what could be (and sounds like) Draco Malfoy's thoughts. It's such an interesting topic, how he might have wanted to be different had it not been for the pressure from his family. The writing is very nice, only a few minor mistakes, and I am honestly a little sad there's not another chapter. Would definitely recommend!"

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The best part of me

"I really enjoyed this story, but soon sad I actually felt sorry for him !!!!!! So full of regret. !!!!!!! Putting all the events from his point of view It was very well done . I wonder if he could go back would he change His behaviour ??????"

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Worth reading :)

"Wow. Poor Draco but I loved the way that the story was told. One of the best one shots I've read."

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The best part of me

"I love it was sad but I love it man why couldn't he get her "

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One Shot

"Great Short story"

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