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Emotionally captivating

"A very nicely written Drarry fanfiction. Emotions were very well written."

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Everything is just *Insert chefs kiss*

"This is THE BEST Drarry story EVER!"

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I totally love this story!

"I am really happy that I came across this story. It is told in a really nice way, I enjoyed reading it. I like your writing style and how well you can describe the situation. Amazing work 🌼💕💜"

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He needs some serious love

"I loved the story. I loved the way the author described what was going on in his head, instead of .cheating, and saying that he slowly explained what went on. The story moved me in a way that made me want to ask for more. I wanted a sequel or a second chapter, but I also love that even though this story was short and simple, it was the length and simpleness that made me love it even more."

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he needs some serious love

"i love it so much i hope you had to it honestly it was like i was there i cant wait to read more"

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He needs some serious love

"The story is great, I wish there was more though. Great writing style and a great plot.I wish it wasnt a one shot and was an actual book though💜"

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He needs some serious love

"I loved this book. it was so sweet and extremely wholesome. I also love the fact that Severus is alive, as is Dumbledore. I really like the fact that Draco isnt a complete ass"

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ERGANT

"im ready for chapter two"

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AMAZING

"I NEED another part to this it is so GOOD!"

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He needs some serious love

"I wish there was more to the book so we could know what happened next "

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he need some serious love

"pretty great story and I feel bad for harry :'( please write more :))!"

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Lovkfn

"Llllllllllilikhfhfjfhc"

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Yes

"Luv this but i wish there was more than just this but my comment on this story is, and i quote "Yes" (A good yes)"

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❤️🧡💛💚💙💜🖤🏳️‍🌈

"This is an amazing one shot. Even though it's a one shot I'd be an amazing book. I really like it tho ❤️🧡💛💚💙💜🖤🏳️‍🌈"

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Awesome

"This was and amazing story and if you could may you add more i just don’t want it to stop there i need more!Please if you can add more!?"

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OMG!!!

"Oksy so for a while i was scavenging through my play store looking for good fan fiction apps WITH drarry and soon came across Inkkit and I downloaded. I then came across this story and just fell in love so much the style and the plot are amazing."

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Love it

"I loved this I couldn't stop awwing"

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He Needs Some Serious Love

"This story is truly BRILLIANT !!!... it got me hook, line and sinker straight away at the opening of the storyline, and it held me captivated and captive until the very end - which I couldn't get to quick enough to find out how the story ended and with what happened to poor ol' Harry !!!!! The Author's extremely descriptive use of language and imaginative use of scenery and settings makes for a vivid picture to be developed within the excellent Story Telling of this tale, and of what unfolds for the main characters and with the deepening relationships and subject matter that emerges in this truly profoundly deep story, which is multi-layered. and is so enthralling from start to finish. The subject matter and issues faced and confronted by the main character in this fascinating story is very apt in today's times and within our society at large. It also has a theme of how devastating the inner struggles can become when dealing with deep personal adversities and when grappling with our own inner demons of 'self acceptance' of our true identities and with coming to terms with self love and healing of old wounds. This story also deals with the wider & more common concept of 'self acceptance' & with embracing our authentic selves, and with allowing others to love and accept us as we are - for who we truly are 'as is'. Love IS Love !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I love this story to the enth degree !!!!!!!!!!!!!... it is raw and real, honest and captivating, diverse and colourful, and it's a truly wonderful story from whoe to GO !!!. Do yourselves a favour folks and read and embrace this story... we ALL need to love and accept one another more freely and openly - without harsh judgements being needed nor necessary or given !!!!!!!!!!! You had me hooked !!!... ALL THE VERY BEST WITH ALL OF YOUR FUTURE WRITING ADVENTURES & VENTURES... MAY THEY BE BLESSED WITH EVERY SUCCESS NOW & ALWAYS... :) Love and Light and Peace... Kudos... shelly27.... :) 'CONGRATS' to this fantastic and naturally gifted and talented Author - Scarhead394 !!!!! :)"

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I loved the story and the plottwist

"I liked the story. It's a story that not that much people wrote or have the idea to write. It's also great that Snape is alive an also nice to Harry. And Draco is a nice person, who don't want that Harry dies, because he likes him. "

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