Inkitt
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Pure love

"Great going so far so good hope she doesn’t detray him. "

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The Mission Went Wrong

"So far, I'm liking what I've been reading. Excellent grammar, punctuation and structure. There's no unnecessary stalling, it's straight to the point, and the characters are totally likeable as well. I'm definitely excited about this book! "

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The mission went wrong

"Exciting, interesting and it pulls you in. Love the style of writing with both characters pov. To anyone that's reading this review before reading, go for it you won't be disappointed."

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NOT LIKE EVERY OTHER STORY

"MOST OF THE STORIES FOLLOW ONE GENRE AND THAT IS IT. BUT, IT IS A NICE NEW TAKE AND IT IS KINDA BREATHTAKING AT THE SAME TIME. I CANNOT READ MORE SINCE IT IS A DIFFERENT TWIST IT MAKES YOU WANT TO READ MORE AND MORE. IT IS SO WORTH IT!"

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Great Start

"Cannot wait for more!"

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"I like the plot you choose but there is quite a Fe grammar mistakes and some of the sentences are not very clear. In some sentences it will talk about Grace and have incorrect pronouns. Also the story feels very rushed. Grace goes from a trained spy but on the first day she gives off as a newcomer because she completely neglects her mission the first day when they were both at the party."

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