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"It's well written plot. Though some editing will have to be done to make it easier to read. It's really interesting and hope to read more. "

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"I love the idea of an alternate version of Harry Potter, but this reads more like a synopsis than a story. There's little description, little interaction, it's mostly just a synopsis of The Sorcerer's Stone with a hyper-competent Harry who doesn't talk to anyone."

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