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What is your opinion?
Adorable poem
"It was great experience reading your poem ! Hoping for more pieces like this , Just a bit working on punctuations will make it fantastic ! Thank you 😊"
Who raised me with pride
"It's a good write up 👍"
Amazing poem...
"The fluency of the poem is so smooth and natural. It is not forced rather it is written with a heart full of emotions. Even if the fluency and feelings are real and natural, it lack in the point of punctuations here and there. This aspect is the one you need to work on. I do hope everyone will like this poem. After reading this poem I feel myself so full of sentiments . I just want to and give papa a bear hug. I want to read more poetry like this. I just give it a thumbs up."
