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Yes awesome

"Awesome very well written and suspenseful "

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This is AMAZING

"This story is so good so far, and I really want to read more! It's very suspenseful, emotional, and dramatic, and something I would totally write because I want to read it. From someone who struggles with similar issues as Draco, you did a great job writing the emotional scene at the beginning. If you are dealing with these issues as well I hope you are doing ok"

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