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The Town has already enforced and shoved the rules down everybody's throats. Evelyn Harley had always obeyed in fear of punishment if she didn't. That is, until she noticed something about that seemed wrong when she visited the outside world for the first time. Sure, The Town had order, but no freedom to go with it. So what's more important? Fighting for your life every day or actually having a life to live? Is this even real life after all?
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Hi Pheonixbird1313,
I just finished reading your story “The Choosing” and I loved it so much. Your writing is amazing, and I kept thinking how cool it would look as a comic.
I really loved the opening scene in the first chapter where Evelyn Harley steps through the town gates into the outside world for the first time, her eyes widening as she confronts the untamed wilderness beyond the oppressive walls. It is ideal for making a comic as the stark contrast between the town’s rigid order and the wild freedom of nature would make for striking, cinematic panels.
I’m a commissioned artist, and I’d love to draw your story into a comic/manga. No pressure though, I just think your work would look awesome in comic form.
You can check out some of my recent work on my DeviantArt username Ev3Verse. If you’re interested, please message me on Discord username bennett_lol so we can bring the story to life visually. I'll be waiting to hear from you!
Regards
Bennett.