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At your mercenary

"Good book although very short. Thanks Author "

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At your mercenary

"Loved the book, especially a strong female lead and male who is not intimidated by her nor jealous. Quick short but beautiful read.. Would definitely recommend.. "

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Fun read

"This was a fun book. Quick read. The plot felt rushed or forced in some places, but I would still recommend it."

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At Your Mercenary

"The title drew me in and the story kept me there. Blake is a total badass, Maksim is swoon worthy, and I was honestly shocked by Finn's role. It was an enjoyable read, thank you."

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At your mercenary

"A fun short story that you enjoy do much that you wish it was longer 🥰 if you're looking for an adult story with some action, humor & passion, it's definitely worth the read."

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At Your Mercenary

"This book was amazing! The author did such a wonderful job at pulling everything together with a twist. I love this book!!"

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At Your Mercenary

"This book was awesome!! You are an amazing writer and author."

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Good story over all thank you

"Good story thank you"

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Great short story!

"I really enjoyed reading this story! "

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Quick paced joyful read leaving me wanting more

"A quick eventful read that I really enjoyed. Thank you for allowing me to meet Blake she really is a badass. "

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At your mercenary

"Another perfect little gem"

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At your mercenary

"I was a bit sad at the end of your story. I would have liked to see a deeper picture of their lives, a bit more story to the story, as it were. Overall, not bad for a short story! I loved the main characters. Some of the supporting characters were barely represented in the story and could have used a bit more development."

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At your mercenary

"2nd story from this authour and certainly doesn't disappoint. Loved this too and once again thank you for having strong independent women as lead characters. "

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Loved the story!

"Story and sweet.. loved the story!! I love stories with strong female characters! Thank you for the read!"

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Short but so good

"Short story but damn it was good. Blake is a badass"

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Nice

"The story is compelling. Good job writer! If you have some great stories like this one, you can publish it on Novel Star, just submit your story to [email protected] or [email protected]"

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Good as always!! Sweet story

"You are very very talented!! Keep on writing!!! A sweet story about a strong woman and stupid males 🤣🤣🤣 antille she finds a good one ❤️❤️❤️❤️ Lovely love story"

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"It keeps you up at night because it such a good read. You can broaden your audience by publishing your story on NovelStar Mobile App."

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Nice

"Such a compelling story. You deserve to be a part of the Novelstar’s writing competition."

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At your mercenary

"Dear author, you never ceased to amaze me of your wild imagination... I must say, you love action alot... hehehhe... One of your best stories... love it much... and thanks..."

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