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I love it so far

"I love the story so far I would love a few more chapters soonish please??"

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Shine

"I like the way story is narrated and written "

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Shine

"I like the way story is narrated and written "

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Very Good! Keep up the good work!

"I feel that this is a very good story and cant wait for more from this author. "

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Great

"So far this story is keeping my interest. I enjoy it when the headmaster is the bad guy. U can feel the emotion in the words. As I can see the writeing style is fine so far. Keep up the great work."

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The truth in the dark

":) this is the most interesting fan-fic i have read from the Harry Potter universe. I am looking forward to the next chapters. There are a few changes made, when it comes to the Harry potter timeline but it doesn't affect the story that much. But so far so good. Will be closely reading this"

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