Inkitt
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Well Written and Very Bingable

"I really enjoyed this book. The way it is written makes it hard to stop reading because you can't wait to find out what happens next! I kept telling myself I'm going to stop on this chapter, then I'd get to the end and have to read another one. The plot was extremely fun, the characters were interesting and likable, and it was written in a way that was not only easy but a joy to read. I will say there were quite a few grammatical errors. But they weren't enough to take me out. The biggest issue I had was it was sometimes hard to figure out which character was speaking. There were also some things that weren't fully explained towards the end. But these things are minor. I had a great time reading this. I'm sad to see that second book was never finished because the plot in that one seems even more fun than this one. "

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Amazing

"I have no words. It was amazing. I cannot wait to read book 2!! I hope she realizes who he is"

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12355

"Very intriguing "

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Loved it!

"Very well written and I'm so sucked into the story! So excited to start book2! "

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Forced into fantasy

"Love the concept! Great job!"

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Interesting

"It has started to pick up and get interesting. I'm curious as to how the 2 main Male characters will react to watch other and what ivy is going to do."

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Forced into the fantasy ❤️

"Love this book ❤️"

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so good!

"wow. so interesting. can't wait for more🥰"

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Chapter 6 bonded

"Waiting for the nexx chapter"

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Forced into fantasy

"Love the idea/plot...can't wait to read more. "

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A page turner

"Update please omg it was so good.."

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Prisoner

"Needs to move faster"

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Recommend!

"Really like the story line! It's different and draws you in. Written well without the typical spelling and grammatical errors. Well done and has me waiting (impatiently because I want more) for an update."

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Can't wait to read more

"This is well written and the plot is really enthralling. I hope to read more soon I'm hooked!"

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Bang story!

"From the moment I read the storyline and what it was about, I was in love! Keep up the good work!"

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Just started reading, like it so far

"Great so far"

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Dropped the ball!!

"You have a good story line. To bad you dropped the ball!!! You get hooked on the story, then you get to the 8th chapter and NOTHING LOADS AFTER THAT!! I have even loaded and read another story, came back and tried several times,and still nothing!!!!!"

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Good

"Okay and good"

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