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"I hope there is more to come!!!?"

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Mafia

"It is a good book, read easily. I think young peoplle would enjoy the book most. A very good story line"

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The Mafia's Little Devil

"Interesting story. There is drama in so many areas. Her mother and the person she married are disgusting. "

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The mafias little devil

"I love it!!!!"

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Good story!

"This book was amazing and I would totally read again but there are some things that bothered me. The grammer was perfect but the punctuation could be better. I also was really bummed when I found out it was over but it still met expectations. Good job! "

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love it

"just finished the first chapter and i can tell this is going to be a really good story! look forward to reading more!"

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Wonderful book

"I feel like this book was well written and I have no doubts that others will love this book as much as I do"

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Amazing but why isn't there another book or something....I wanna know more please update soon

"It's pretty good but the problem is that from the past 5 months they haven't updated... it's such a good novel at least tell us where we can find the other chapters or books? "

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It amezing

"It’s so good am literally crying and am so shocked "

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Mafia's little devil

"I love the story line, the suspense and action. Wish the writer would upload more chapters at a time though. I would recommend the book to my sister and my best friend. Thank you for dedicating you time in the story. "

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Amazing! When is the next update?

"I love this so much because it is funny but also tense. I can’t wait for the next update- I hope it is soon! "

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Santo Mr mafia

"Love it, will it continue? Your writing is on point."

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The mafia's little devil

"Really eye catching and amazing plot"

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Everything

"I love everything about the book keep up the good work "

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The Marias litel devil

"It is good. i like it"

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The Mafia’s Little Devil

"The main character has a solid personality, something I like. Stereotypically, the female lead is always innocent or timid which personally I think makes the story boring and unrealistic."

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Book

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UPDATE PLEASE

"Please update the story. I am very engrossed into the story so please update it."

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The Mafia's Little Devil

"This was a good story Descriptive words were amazing, the did have some spelling problems but that's ok I don't mind"

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Good

"Good so far, interesting. Enjoy that it gets to the point fairly quickly and doesn’t drag too much. "

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