What is your opinion?
My Dragon Warrior Mate
"I like almost everything. While I gave the overall and plot 5's, I had to give grammar and writing style 4's. Simply because at times it was difficult for me to keep track of who was speaking. I would most definitely recommend this book to anyone who enjoys reading dragon stories. "
Unique but needs work
"Review notes MyYour description is greatly lacking important punctuation which makes it hard to read and can put readers off. There is no need for the world gathering to be in all capitals throughout the story too. The first paragraph in the prologue is an awkward opening and the second paragraph would work better. Your sentences are quite long and could be broken up into shorter snappier ones to make the story flow better. The prologue being cut short then the next chapter introducing Sam would work better as it is awkward to just introduce while explaining the world the story is set in. You could introduce Sam first then have her explain the world instead. Letting the reader know what century this story or time period would help set the scene too as it is unclear. The idea for this story though is very cool, dragon shifters aren't common and it is clear this world is intense for a female to live in. I don't think I have seen one before. You need to show the reader more things instead of telling the reader, especially with what happens with the gathering process. Your paragraphs are a bit all over the place, look at the layout of them again, some are too long and some are to short. The story could benefit from more dialogue too. Overall this story is unique idea but needs editing."
Great reader
"The story is good so far the only problem is the flow of the story. It feels like there is big jumps and not a flow. But other than that love the story so far."
