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A beautiful Rose

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Summary

This is the story of Dre and his beautiful Rose. When he lays eye's on her for the first time he literally fell of his chair.Rose the feisty Jamaican girl with the skin of chocolate and curvse to kill knew she was special and wouldn't settle for less. Please note this my very first time writing I would love and appreciate your feed back and constructive criticism. please no mean words just highlight and I'll correct any mistakes. 😍😘

Status
Ongoing
Chapters
9
Rating
n/a
Age Rating
18+

A new start

Waking up to the view of the ocean is something that takes my breath away every morning. I can't quite put my finger on it but it's different from all the chaos out on the warm streets of St.Ann. I grew up in the Caribbean, Jamaica to be exact it's really a beautiful island but I leave today to start a new life in america with my dad he's a lawyer, he got offered a job in the states and sooooo this brings us to the part where I leave my entire life here on the Island to go live in new york.

My flight leaves in three hours so were leaving now I dont have alot of friends to say good bye to only shawn he's been in my life since forever we started as best friends until when i was seventeen we started dating ofcourse now I'm nineteen and I thought maybe it's time I lose the big v card but that got side tracked since I couldn't do it so we said our goodbyes and now it time to go. I take a last look out the airplane window and made up my mind that is the land of opportunity.....

We're finally here and I just have to say it" jesas christ!! ( jesus christ ) damn it's freezing" my dad's laughter filled the car.

"You know you remind of your mother so much sometimes it hurts" says dad.

" I miss her too dad"

my mom died five years ago in an car accident and without her our little family felt even smaller I thinks that why my dad is soooo over everything, anyways it only took us about an hour to get to our new home a nice two bedroom house in a nice neighbourhood is a plus score for me its beautiful inside.

The living room has bold colours and I rushed to see the rest of the house which led me up the stairs to the bedrooms dad has the master so I guess the other is mine when I went inside it was breath taking everything screamed charismatic yet sophisticated and quickly unpacked and took a shower in my own bathroom can you believe it I got my own bathroom since I've always had my own room I sleep in the nude so I made my way to my very comfy bed to call it a night I found the perfect spot and then lights out.

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