Behind Closed Doors

"Hi theangelCas The title was perfect for the story, intriguing. You made me care about the characters from the start. Your descriptions and choice of words were brilliant. why didn't Dean talk to Sam, or someone, about the abuse? Why did Sam keep it secret when he knew what happened? Dean and Sam would more likely call John Dad, not Sir. They would call Bobby by name, or Uncle Bobby perhaps. Did Sam and Dean steal a car to get away? Sam and Dean would be more likely to shout for the people in the restaurant to help them. It was as if Sam and Dean didn't want to tell Bobby about the abuse, but in real life, they'd be anxious to blurt it all out and beg for help. The story seemed to jump backwards and forwards between the scenes and it was confusing to keep track of where the characters were, and the timing of the events. Every scene showed strong writing though. The story seemed unfinished. Did Dean ever get his full memory back? I wish you success with this story; you have the makings of an excellent book. If you would like to review my book, ‘Who’s There?’, here is the link. https://www.inkitt.com/stories/horror/893926?ink_source=users.profile&ink_block=stories&ink_page_number=&ink_metric= Thank you LittleScribbler"

Behind closed doors

"I loved the plot❤ And especially when memories start flooding in Dean's mind. That was my favourite part😊🌈"

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Wonderfully Written!

"Everything is perfectly descripted. Great mixture of emotions, scenery, and action. A few spelling errors here and there, but the sentences still flow smoothly! "