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Alpha Onyx

"Tout d'abord je tiens à m'excuser si je n'ai pas toujours mis de commentaires c'est parce que j'étais tellement à fond dans l'histoire que j'avais hâte de sa oor ce qui allait arriver à Luna et à Wyatt. Merci beaucoup pour cette magnifique histoire, je ne me suis pas ennuyée du début jusqu'à la fin. Il y avait tant partager comme l'intrigue, l'humour, la trahison, l'amour, etc. Merci beaucoup j'ai beaucoup aimé vous lire. J'attends la suite avec impatience. Merci beaucoup 😊 "

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Alpha Onyx

"Ich liebe dieses Buch. Ich habe es verschlungen. Ich hoffe es kommt sehr bald das 2. Buch. Ich kann es kaum erwarten wie es weitergeht "

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Ou es la suite?

"Pardon mais a quand la suite? Tu nous laisse sur une fin de meme sais pas gentil 😅"

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Love

"I need more, at first I was having a hard time following but I didn’t seem to mind it either. Most times it’s hard for me to keep interest but this had me locked in. I absolutely can’t wait for more, and to see this finished. Luna is hilarious and I find myself laughing from her remarks. Definitely read!"

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Alpha Onyx

"I love the book "

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Great storyline

"Always likes a feisty heroine with a backbone "

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I love it, this is the third time i read it

"I love it, its my third time reading it and every time i finish jt in one day"

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Alpha 0nyx

"Wonderful story "

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Very good

"Some typo stuff but im looking forward to the next book. Read this one in one sitting, fantastic read."

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Awesome

"Great read. Some parts didn’t make sense on who was talking or who was who. Great ending but ugh irritated. Guess the witch worked. "

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Love it all

"Love it love it love it "

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Avaluna

"Very lame in some places but good in others It’s not the best book I’ve read but it’s not the worst hopefully the next one is better "

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Alpha Onyx

"Wow! Great book! Not sure how I feel about the ending. I still don't think that's Onyx. I think he has a twin maybe and is using him to somehow keep her safe. Can't wait to read more..."

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Ohh

"Super good"

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Good

"Very beautiful story. I enjoy reading it "

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Alpha onyx book 1

"Excellent book loved it"

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Brilliant, action packed and most of all hilarious

"So loving this book. Avaluna is a girl after my own heart. She tries to take no shit and calls Onyx everything she can think of in a dogs world. She has me in stitches, not having laughed so much in a while with tears."

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Loved it

"Laughed near enough every chapter even though it’s serious at times. Great read. Now for No2"

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Book one: Alpha Onyx

"Amazing story! I loved it"

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Michelle

"Verry nice book so far. Like the story line and the comedy in between. There is action sadness laughter all in one. Every chapter makes you want to read more. Great book "

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