What is your opinion?
Injoy
"Injoy this book second time reading it "
Call me daddy
"Enjoyed call me daddy, loved tge different points of views. "
Call Me Daddy
"This was amazing. It had every emotion and the plot was a huge twist. And the the end, so it was perfect"
Loved it❤
"I loved this book but there is only one thing I didn't enjoy and it was the part where zayne killed himself. I didn't like how him and asher had a history. I would recommend this book to my best friend Eva 'cause she makes everything dirty and she actually would rally enjoy it. Thanks for the book❤"
Call me Daddy
"Call me Daddy ... ??? Daddy who ??? They tile alone is all wrong for this book and with that ENOUGH SAID !!! "
Needs Some Editing
"Firstly, I do like the plot of this story, albeit it's a plot that used a lot in romance stories, but y'know if it ain't broke don't fix it. I like the characters, they certainly talk like college students (which a lot of writers who write young people totally miss and make them sound like grown ass adults rather than college students, so you got that nailed). There's just three main problems I have: 1) There is nothing more scary looking that writing that is just in one big block paragraph. I opened the first chapter and thought "dear lord". It's just not aesthetically pleasing, can make it hard to keep track of where you are in the paragraph/sentence, and can be overwhelming. You need to separate into smaller paragraphs and lines. 2) I saw a lot of grammar problems, mostly the use of "you're" vs "your" , and so I think some major editing from the grammar/spelling side of things needs to be done because people notice grammar errors and it delivers a bit of a "shock" if you will to the brain when we process those errors that jolts the reading experience, hence why it's really important to fix them. 3) A lot of writers struggle with showing vs. telling, and this story does a lot more "telling" rather than "showing". It's not as bad as some other ones I've seen, that's for sure, but it needs some work still. You want the reader to figure things out about characters themselves by leaving subtle hints or by an internal dialogue that's more true to what happens in life (our inner dialogue is very rarely so literal or so forthcoming, since we already know these things about ourselves so we wouldn't reiterate it in our mind). So I think that to grow as a writer that's something you need to look into style/plot wise. The other two are very easy fixes and just have to do with physical structure and grammar, which you can easily fix by using grammar/spell check websites. The showing vs. telling is something you're going to need to put more effort into though, but sooo many writers (myself included) struggle with that, so you're certainly not alone!"
the book is a mess so this review is a mess (sorry😭)
"Spoilers ahead⚠️: first, the name is kind of misleading, who are we calling daddy, that wasn’t mentioned at all it the book, not one time. The story started out sweet, it seemed like a nice little book about four roommates, and how one of them was falling for his teacher and a side plot of two of the other roommates together, which I didn’t mind because I found both stories cute. Then halfway through it, it’s like it changes because the teacher and the one of the other roommates were married. skipping to the end - why does the teacher who was 20 years old dating a 15 year-old getting a happy ending and is basically forgiven at the end by like literally everybody but the 15-year-old who had lots of trauma (mind you he overdosed and was having nightmares about said teacher) got reamed out by his friend and ended up taking his own life. why are we forgiving the teacher who literally was with a 15-year-old while he was in his 20s and who was also an abuser?? I hated the fact that zayne killed himself after being yelled at by one of his alleged best friends while his best friend went and forgave his boyfriend/zayne’s abuser. not to mention the whole cheating plot with Jeremy . It seemed so random and so out of place and so unnecessary. im sorry i was really into this book at first but then it just went downhill, I just don’t like how basically a villain was one of the MMC’s and how he got a happy ending while the person he abused and terrorized and traumatized had the sad ending and didn’t get to end up with anybody. and after there was just a time skip and it just seemed like everybody kind of moved on already. zayne’s boyfriend already had a new boyfriend. And people were talking about them getting married. it just kind of seemed like he just killed himself and everybody just moved on so quickly unfortunately all in all strong start but we started going downhill towards the middle and bad ending"
