What is your opinion?
When It Rained
"I personally love this so much. It is heartwarming and stomach-churning at the same time. Despite the short story, it was full of emotional moments, and I found myself tearing up. The relapse of cancer made my heart twist and I could just feel how Harry and Ginny must've felt. I do think there could have been a bit more to the story, maybe how James and Albus took the death of their little sister, how other family members did. Though all in all I thought it was wonderful, I especially love the details about how Lily would ask them to dance in the rain and then once she died, they learned how to. I personally would have found it nice to know how the kids felt specifically, and I think it would improve the sequencing much more. Though it was beautiful and definately something to be proud of making."
Writing skills
"I found your story deeply moving the emotions felt authentic and the message stayed with me long after reading. what inspired you to write something so sincere and impactful? "
I loved this.
"O.M.G. This is literally making me cry. Feeling like thank you so much/ how could you do this to me. Im fine. Happens with some of my favorite stories, including this one."
Amazing story
"Your story was so emotional and captivating, I almost cried at the end. I never cry. This was an amazing short-story."
when it rained
"ohmigod this was so sad i cried thru the whole thing"
